Reflection 1.1

I think my first draft went pretty well.  I was able to get the main points incorporated into my paper, but I know I need to add more of the author's evidence and reasons for her strong opinion.  I need to add internal citations, direct quotes, and more about logos.  I believe this will strengthen my essay tremendously.  I was comfortable writing this essay, and I believe the meeting with Professor Henderson helped a great deal and her critiques will make my paper stronger.