Reflection 2.2

I was very pleased with my final product of my paper. I was able to incorporate a scholarly source well. I added more reliable sources to my paper, which I believe made it a lot stronger and more persuasive. I was very pleased with my classmates comments on the paper and I made some changes to my paper and it made my paper flow nicely. An important aspect that I added to the paper were transition sentences. Once I added these, I was able to see what a difference they made and how much better the paper sounded. I liked getting my paper work shopped. The comments made me see my strengths and improve on some weaknesses.