Prewriting 4.2

The Climax for the Narrative

I think for my story the climax would be the part when my mother and I confront the little girl's mother about the situation. I thought maybe at first, the climax would be the part when the little girl is getting beat up, but I think the mother's reaction in this experience is more of the climax. You are anticipating a certain reaction. You don't know what her reaction will be, and the reader might be shocked to learn about her reaction, I know I was.

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I told my mother what happened to the little girl with tears streaming down my face. I grabbed her hand and brought her to my mother. My mother was very calming to this young child and told her we would find her mother and that it would all be alright. I couldn't wait to tell her mother, because then I thought to myself that she would make she this boy (the little girl's brother)would never lay hands on her again. That was the comfort I was anticipating, but this comfort I never received. This experience still haunts me and I still get all choked up even when I think about it.