Reflection 3.2

I really enjoyed writing this paper. I found that the research process was much better for this paper, with a lot of very useful information. I wrote my first draft and I met with professor Henderson to discuss it. She made very useful comments and critiques. I realized that I need to add some things and condense other parts. I think it was good that I added more acknowledgment to the fact that not all immigrants are carrying diseases and criminals, it helped my paper sound more Rogerian. Professor Henderson also said that an outside voice in my conclusion would help and so I picked a quote from President Obama and I believe that it strengthened my paper and made it seem much more relevant to today.